All Comments on 'Summer of '88: Pt. 04'

I hope this isn't THE END of this story.

Good series and very hot. I enjoyed reading it.

Wouldn't know where to take it from here, but I'll wait for anything you write like this.

Great story thanks.

Good set up in the final chapter but then all a bit rushed which was a pity. Overall 4/5 but with a longer and more detailed climax with a satisfactory ending, it would have been full marks

What a great story series! I'm hoping that you continue it!

FIRST OFF, 5++*****, WELL WRITTEN, GREAT STORY LINE,

SEEMED LIKE A REAL FAMILY. AND OH!!YA!!! HOPE ALEX

CAN HOLD UP...THANKS... GREAT JOB

You have a very good imagination, BUT lack the ability to use words that boil the blood, and you lack an erotic "Build up" of events. Any mother that wants to fuck her son needs to tease him by enticing him in the utmost erotic manner. Just the erotic mind-fuck of having your mom is a lot to take a young mind over the waterfalls of eroticism, but to really be pooled into the taboo of all taboos is something that has to build, tease, build, tease, and the eruption must be refreshed each time...therefore the story cannot flow a dry creek bed and maintain its momentum. So, the story must keep fresh with any flow that sweeps and entangles the lovers involved. Your reader wants to have precum oozing from his cock so intensely that he will desire to scoop it up and taste the river of love-lave flowing from his depths...a river YOU created. Yummy 😋. Get as twisted in your writing as the deliciously twisted and forbidden sexual act of mother and son.

To look into my mother's eyes as I ate her sweet nectar and felt her body orgasm would make me desire her deeper than any other, and would make me the ultimate part of her the NO ONE could ever touch!

*****That was a great read. Very exciting HOT AZZ finish!! Thanks for sharing.

Good story, but it could be better IMHO... I'm not sure why you're anti-foreplay.

Still gave you 5*s for the story. Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Thanks, I enjoyed that.

If you want a story to stay believable, don't have the women suddenly start talking like a random guy from a porn video once the sex begins.