All Comments on 'Pink Pills of Persuasion Ch. 01'

I enjoyed the first of hopefully many, chapters. A little twist on the genre. I am looking forward to seeing what else Pink has in store for us.

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!

very well done, look forward to a 2nd ch. the story kept my interest and want to see where you are going with this, try not to take too long to write the 2nd ch, I hate waiting to finish reading a book, lol but, don't rush the story take your time to get it right before you post it and I am sure it will be worth the wait. again good job.

Fab, loved it; looking forward to chapter 2!

Pretty good job!

I liked it and it held my interest. I would suggest making all further entries at least 2 lit pages long. That would be about 4 pages in most word processing programs.

While definitely a fantasy, I enjoyed this treatment of a world where #MeToo isn't evident.

I'm assuming that since Chris didn't have a pink hue, he might have taken the pink pills also. Which would give him the same abilities. Very much looking forward to the next chapter and anything else you have written.

Awesome idea. The story needs edited a bit, but great start.