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this story suks
I think the story is hot
Probably the illiterate who commented before me reads as well as he writes, because the story does not suck. India, on the other hand...
an interesting story
Like the naive and curious nature of the lead character amd the tale was erotic in a nasty way. Well done!
Kinda make me want to carry a machete....
...& the head that he thinks with won't be my 1st target! Or maybe he does think with the little 1! Don't know, don't really give a shit!
Great story
I really enjoyed this story as I have all of David's stories. This kind of primitive behavior and sexuality is much more real than many people will ever realize. I hope you keep up the good work, and possibly write a sequel, perhaps involving Bob and the mother.
Bob
smokin' hot
Would have loved to be there watching too, despite the nasty overtones. Luckily it's just a story, but a hot one nonetheless. Hope to see more.
Absolutely steaming
I absolutely loved it. So damn filthy - I am just dripping from reading it. Fantastic. Keep it up. Summer47
hope that sicko of a father
gets well fucked in prison.
What a fucked up story, I gave it a "1".
What a fucked up story, the father ties up his daughter, whips her and the savagely rapes her for giving Bob a blowjob. This makes country people look like they are stupid barbarians that think brutality and incest is normal. I wonder now if the oldest girl got pregnant as a way to get away. Those who think this is a good story must come from the same backwoods country as this fucked up family. I like incest stories but hate stories where women are raped, unlike some of these perverts I don't find rape funny or exciting.
that aint the country neither
meanwhile the little sister was laughing quietly as she watched from nearby.
go away
1 star
5
to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote
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