All Comments on 'Knight in Tarnished Armour Ch. 01'

...just 'cause you put March of Cambredth in a story. Damn, I love that song. Just don't do anything in later chapters that would justify The Temper of Revenge...

will it be long or short, what will be the twists, turns, hills and valleys?

Liked the description of John's berserker rage. Rings so true to me since I've felt that ever so cold/hot rage in battle.

John was also right in his claim that kicking his opponent to end the fight was a legal move. Happened all the time in real midevil battles.

love your story love knights and i love rapist geting what they deserve. geting the crap beat out of them

Waiting with baited breath for your next chapter... I give you my rose scented handkerchief as a favor when you go into battle.. Love the story!!!!!!!!

Great beginning! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!

A little minstrel music and you got it made!

I'd have preferred to read three Lit pages of this story (one is never sufficient), but I look forward to reading further parts - and soon!.