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Smiles
Like the Mona Lisa...
I wonder if she had poetry hiding up her skirt?
Would Leonardo have known?
can relate
to these images ..really nice sunny pen...blue
beautiful!!
just a beautiful poem sandspike, and to leave yourself smiling, in all the pictures, what a wonderful gift. Maybe you should write this out, in your own hand and leave it with a photo of you smiling, :)
great stuff
Loved the title,
a really good piece,
thanks.
~ J
imagery laced.....
throughout this piece.....i've got to pull out my favorite spot here:
holding page after page
handwritten poetry
tales of bars, beaches, and love
products of a shallow mind
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nice work......don
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The first line or two is not very exciting. Actually, the first line is a bit weak.
The rest is quite nice.
These lines are fantastic:
fading reality into cool pastels
to be dried upon the summer sand
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Your poems make me smile.
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Nicely written
Attic-bound
Journey of discovery.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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