All Comments on 'Sneaky One Night Stand'

is her name Jeanne or Mary?

Couldn't you have tried to make this just the TEENIEST bit plausible?

Hubby didn't know what was going on and they have shared before, so this could be a little bit more relistic.

the best part of your stories are at the end because there over.Your arotten story teller and should be a reader not a writer.

At the beginning the wife was given the name "Jeanne"... All of he sudden she become Mary...

The idea is okay, but the story sounded like it was written by a 10 year old. The sentences were very choppy. And then there's the name switch in the middle... Keep working to improve your writing skills.

Juvenile writing style on an unrealistic story. No normal person would have unprotected sex with a random stranger.