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did not leave me hanging like the REAL 24 :) but all in all a good story
You've left me hanging again!
RedHaired andFriendly:
What a great start to a story that seems to be at a crossroads. It's senuous, sexy, and bittersweet. Which path of the several possible ones available to you will you take? It will be interesting to read the next chapter(s) and find out. Ronnie W.
It's gonna be a hot day.
Well done! You write like a poet, a dirty, detailed poet. I'll be waiting to see what else you have happen in this story. Aside from a very few grammatical glitches, it's very well done! Keep it up!
We should all have 24 hours like this!
And I thought the heatwave was only in the Northeast? Wow! What a hot ,steamy,sexy story!!! I need to wipe the sweat off my brow and change my boxers too! You are terrific the way you have them so connected to each other! We should all have 24 hours like this in our lives! Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what comes next!!
nice!
I love the concept of this story, Red...and the skillful way you have of detailing the lovemaking. It makes the idea seem all the more hot! Wonderful, loving fun...
Absolutely The Best
RH&F,
You have done it again. This was just totally marvelous! One point, hoever. When you were on top the first time, you should have teased (tortured) him longer and longer. My lady does this to me. She has me cuffed to the bed and she just keeps teasing on and on. When she finally puts it in, she says she can feel me "cum all the way to the top of my head." hahahahah. She is probably right, it is quite an exposion. Wonderful story and descriptions.
Hagar
Wonderful
Makes me long for my own 24 hours with the man I love online!!!
hott hott hott
wow, is all i can say. as i sat here and read this story i couldnt help but crave my lover at that exact moment. it was seductive and sexy. good job.
Awsome
That was amazing, detailed to perfection. A bit of romantic gestures, emotions, temptations and eroticly spell binding.
Brilliant
Awesome story, well done! One the hottest ones I've read!
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