by kobalt.9
I feel that this is only the beginning and I just know you won't leave me wanting....
Please tell me there's a Chapter 2 coming soon-
please?
...for capturing such nuances and giving such a vivid account. So vivid in fact, that the reader feels nervous and the anticipation gives me that tense feeling too. I'm hoping that there is more to come.
-V.S.
I loved this story! You had my attention from word one, and kept it throughout. I felt anxious right along with you, anticipating what was to come. I too, hope that this is the beginning of a series of 'Lisa' stories.