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by Lushisss06/20/05

Of wanting..

I feel that this is only the beginning and I just know you won't leave me wanting....

Please tell me there's a Chapter 2 coming soon-

please?

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by Anonymous06/24/05

thank you...

...for capturing such nuances and giving such a vivid account. So vivid in fact, that the reader feels nervous and the anticipation gives me that tense feeling too. I'm hoping that there is more to come.
-V.S.

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by Bent06/25/05

Wonderful!

I loved this story! You had my attention from word one, and kept it throughout. I felt anxious right along with you, anticipating what was to come. I too, hope that this is the beginning of a series of 'Lisa' stories.

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by Anonymous11/09/05

Until chapter 2~

Ocean. .


~L

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