All Comments on 'Meanwhile, in a Parallel Universe...'

A pleasure to read. I loved the way you painted the relationship between the two. Thanks.

Melissa is a compelling character. A mess of contradictions, if I remember correctly. Sexy but not pretty, not even cute. And her smell - coconut and vinegar? That whole initial description made me fall head first in love with her. What a great picture of her you painted. Sweet love story - great girl.

Thank you. I’ll remember Melissa. *****

Very close to a 5🌟 effort but for the ending. I want to know w more. Is there a “ rest of the story”?

Thanks for this entertainment.

Thanks for the kind comments. This "ended" with Kip and Melissa falling in love. Happily ever after? Not necessarily. Our lives are episodic in nature, linked by ongoing adventures and happenings. Where Kip and Melissa will go next is anyone's guess. Perhaps I'll one day be inspired to find out. I don't see it crying out for a sequel. Later on perhaps. We'll see.Thanks again for reading and commenting.

I loved the way you inter-weaved the story line. The character development was supurb. I was so excited to read that the story was based on the evolving romance, not filled with dozens of needless sex scenes. Nice touch on working the mother back into the story. I don"t remember much any information on his family.

I half expected her to convalescence at his house. Please Continue, There are so many story lines left dangling to stop. 5 Stars