All Comments on 'Breakdown Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice

Well, you took a bit of a break since your last chapter. I liked this one though. You kept the ideas flowing and the story moving. Not to mention the obvious things. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more.

Skate

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Loved It!!!!!!!

I am so glad you decided to continue this story. And would love to see more of the 3 of them cont. in another series of stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

crap

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
please please

More !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please

Taterbug7396Taterbug7396almost 9 years ago
Great story!!!!

Would love to read more of this story.........

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