What a well-written story with an new twist on a common theme. Kudos!
Funny, horny and one senses the oral girl in the author.
A mighty fine little tale you told Carol. I for one gladly would have opted for the kiss . . . as I have on many occasions.
Only problem, stuff like "OK" without any context.
Otherwise, quite hot.
Incredible story. Everytime I thought I'd be overcum with lust, there was a laugh-out-loud funny line.
Not sure what the previous comment about no context for the "OK" was about. I thought the description and purpose of it were explained fully.
As far as uber-dickhead "Big Mike" is concerned, I agree with Lisa, "How does his wife stand him?" Of course, there is that potential answer: "Calling him Big was small credit. He was huge. I don't think I'd ever seen such a cock. It was immense, red, thick, and the head seemed to be the size of an apple."
One caveat: keep your dictionary handy (and not just to check "obnoxious prick" for Big Mike's photo).
A truly delightful story. Thank you Carol.
Well written (I love the asides), and well thought out. It read at a perfect pace that draws the reader through the story, and ends in a wonderful twist of fate.
Thanks for the boner, I'd love the chance to donate my cum for your orgasming pleasure (and I don't mind the taste of my own, I actually kind of like it).
Fun story...the voice of expereince? Or fantasy? Doesn't matter; I was taken there by your words and was rooting for you from beginning to end...
I very much enjoyed this amusing and horny story. Loved the language and references, and the first-person narration. Lisa sounds like a whole lot of fun to be around... especially when she's thirsty!
This was easily my favourite Literotica story, and I thank the author very much indeed.
I'm off now to search for that bartender's website, to add a few recipies of my own.
What a fantastic very well written story with detail in all the right places yet enough "gray" areas for the imagination to run wild.
brilliant story . fun but the feeling being so nice to have one such as you taking one and all an out standing very hot story love it .
Once again, thanks. I'm glad you liked this story. I had fun writing it.
Carol: i had a girl friend back in the 70s that did just. she would suck and drain me everymornig, we'd meet for lunch (hers) i'd fuck her mouth then we'd go back to work. she then would drink some more cum as we watched tv, then put me to sleep after sucking more cum down her throat... each blowjob she gave me would orgasm her! come to find out she loved cum somuch, she was sucking her brother off also, and suspect her dad too.AFter two years i figured she sucked my sperm down at least 365 x 2yrs x at least once per day, most twice per day. she loved sperm as much as you do. keep up the good work, and more dad fucking dtr's mouth stories, and son fucking mom's mouth stories. i too tasted my own cum, and it wasn't bad
He was hung like a horse, but she deep throated him anyway. What a gal, and what guy wouldn't love to be on the receiving end of one of her blow jobs? Great story.
ah carol...thanks for the lovely tale. your lisa character is one i'd love to "meat"- and fill with my own man cream- in person!
I don't read them often, but I try to. Thank you for reading this oldie. I'm glad you liked it and left a comment. Regards.
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