by absintheminddgrl
I was kinda sad when it
finished because i wanted
to read more! Lovely poem.
Thanks.
~ J
....but felt it fell apart in the last couple of lines which feel out of place. I enjoy rhyming works and you held the rhythm well.
Tess
The rhythm and rhyme works unusually well
So much so that it serves to give huge impact to
The ending's dissonance.