Any-Mouse critics are jerks who can't write and can't get it up.
I really didn't notice the mistakes if there were some. I was enjoying the tale.
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Anonymous06/08/05
loved it
great
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Anonymous06/10/05
Great Details!
Really detailed which is something that I like in a WELL WRITTEN story! Two Thumbs up here!
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Anonymous06/14/05
wish it were me
it was like being there
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Anonymous07/04/05
I never eat a banana the same way again
I like sexy stories that give an average day the potential to result in a fun, exciting adventure. Isn't that what many of us do during the doldrums of a day, evening, dinner with friends, etc? Maybe if we just invite the right person to dinner . . .
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Dinner has two N's
Dining Room has one "N"
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Any-Mouse critics are jerks who can't write and can't get it up.
I really didn't notice the mistakes if there were some. I was enjoying the tale.
loved it
great
Great Details!
Really detailed which is something that I like in a WELL WRITTEN story! Two Thumbs up here!
wish it were me
it was like being there
I never eat a banana the same way again
I like sexy stories that give an average day the potential to result in a fun, exciting adventure. Isn't that what many of us do during the doldrums of a day, evening, dinner with friends, etc? Maybe if we just invite the right person to dinner . . .
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