All Comments on 'Whipping Wednesday Ch. 02'

This story was hot and heavy

Enjoyed each word

such fun

write some more

Good story getting better at the end. I have to say that as I read your story I discovered my primordial sadistic streak. I was getting aroused for sure...but the story ended before it ended.

I was looking forward to a more complete description about how your master was enjoying seeing you writhing in pain; how you were screaming inside as he continued to inflict unbearable pain with a smile...that sort of stuff.

I would think that being severly whipped not knowing when it would end would cause a desperate mental state...sort of like the stories about "breaking" someone with a whip...when it's over, the slave has definitely learned to obey....yeah!!

Ohhhh, very nice Rose. I hope there's more and more.