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by phoenix76406/09/05

Good, but get an editor

This is a good story, but you have made numerous mistakes which hurts the quality. Your gammar is poor, and you have used the wrong words on many occasions. Please get someone to proof-read it, and then re-submit. If the rest of your stories are of this quality, I look forward to reading them - after you get an editor.

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