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The Desert of the Soul

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by Anonymous

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by Reltne06/05/05

Very Nice

Some excellent thoughts:
"You only find religion in the desert,
in gardens maybe philosophy some times"

"you're not far from the kingdom of heaven,
when you can see the awesome beauty of a well-survived scar."

Thank you some Sunday mornig pleasure.

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by My Erotic Tale06/05/05

spiral

... of words that tantalize the soul.
With wit written in code~

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by dcpoet4406/05/05

enjoyed this.....

as you hit on some key things such as religion and philosophy. it has some nice movement....don

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by Anonymous06/06/05

I came back

..on Reltne's recommendation and I'm glad I did. This poem has a lovely a lovely feel to it.

Tess

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