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Knotted silence
You are always restrained with the spring is fully wound. One day the spring will uncoil like a whip ;-)
Good poem!
b'brig
touches
deep issues of longing and written and formatted perfect...lovely words...bluerains
lovely piece
really well written,
enjoyed the read.
Thanks.
~ J
your poem
has been mentioned in todays reviews
*****
I like your internal rhyming and use of alliteration. An all together satisfying read.
Tess
I can't escape this verse...
"you, who were immortal...an essence beyond time...rhyme to my reason...a forever, ever happy" as I suppose you cannot escape the feelings that stirred you to write this piece. Although I have enjoyed all the variety of topics and formats with which you have pleasured our site, I do especially like this type, K. An absolutely beautifully expressed, heart poured out poem
Vixxx
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Filled with feelings
Of emptiness and loss...
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.
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5, you are good with repeating sounds, but "you, who" begins to sound funny.
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