All Comments on 'Bought Ch. 04'

by EDSpencer

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Keep Writing

I'm loving this series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Please write more!

This story is amazing. I can't wait to see where the story goes and I am very sure where ever it goes it will stay a wonderfully hot story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I've never read anything quite like this...

...you've woven your own spell upon the words...they have etched my heart.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very good!

Nice story, apart from the switch of names in the middle, (when you said it was Rhoe when it was really Khelman.) Apart from that, good writing keep it up!

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