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Foolish Desire

byBelle_in_south©
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by Jennifer C06/06/05

Love it

The heartbreaking knowledge
of wanting so badly what
you cannot have! You brought
that out so well with your
words, I think alot of people
will relate to this, I know
I did!
Great work,
Thanks.
~J

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by Anonymous06/17/05

the greatest

Hey Belle,
I loved your poem it surpasses shakespear by far you have more passion than his did

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