All Comments on 'Keep Me Up'

Wow, you, sure, love, those , comma's. It', very, distracting,.!?:;"'.TomJ

Good first time story Ameas, I enjoyed it. I guess the next morning proved he may be taken seriously? Ignore the crap comment about the punctuation; it's a lot harder to write than to read. Keep going.

Very good, except for the part about the guy licking his own cum... that was a gross detail.