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Honeymoon for Three

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by Anonymous01/26/08

Fantastic twist

What a fantastic little twist at the end of the story! It made it even better! I loved it!

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by Anonymous08/02/10

Wow!

Simple, sweet, and perfect! I especially love the ending.

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by namidaboshi03/06/11

Nice twist

Loved this story. Especially loved the ending. Good job. Please write more of this or like this. :)

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by Anonymous07/27/16

WELL DONE

Excellent twist at the end for the less-imaginative reader. Bravo!

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