All Comments on 'Shared Fantasy: Heather's Wish'

Congratulations. You indicated the story was very real and it came across that way. To me, it was far more erotic than the vast majority of anal stories, too many which appear written by people who have never tried anal. Your girlfriend's thoughts and expressions were very much like those of women who have given me their anal virginity. The obvious communications and caring for each other's feelings came through in the story, unlike the many anal stories which seem written by angry men bent on demeaning women.

Again, congratulations on sharing a real experience.

with the verbal exchanges and you made it respectful of each other - nice work and very erotic.

Your own words say it all ... Thank You for a very nice story that says so much more about love than simple sex.

"Thank you," she whispered.

Tom couldn't help chuckling. "I should be thanking you."

"Ok, we'll call that a team effort. It was wonderful. It feels strange, but it definitely stimulates my brain exactly how I thought it would."

Well done! Sexy and sensitive. You wrote this excellent story with feeling. The only thing is that they went into the bedroom twice. Keep writing!

I've just finished reading this author's "Shy Girl" as well, and both are very capably written. "Shared Fantasy" is more romantic than "Shy Girl," but it's also a little more predictable. That's not really a bad thing, as "Shared Fantasy" is very much an idealized version of a couple's first anal experience. Nice work!

Loved your story, quite similar to my own first anal experience, though mine happened much later in life. What about the follow-up, when the girlfriend fulfills his fantasy?