Great story full of excitement and well told. All th ethings I dream of contained in one piece. Thanks
Superlative descriptive wordsmithing of the girls. You're improving. Regards, Roger
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Great story full of excitement and well told. All th ethings I dream of contained in one piece. Thanks
Good word pictures
Superlative descriptive wordsmithing of the girls. You're improving.
Regards, Roger
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