by lucifers_whore
Dad or stepdad? Make up your mind. Donβt even get me started about the grammar. *
Daughter gets what she wants.
Both are HAPPY
How about another chapter?
This is the first time I gave a story one star. You have some old dude RAPING a woman. Then you progress to chocking a woman. What the fuck is wrong with you??? I am glad you made this one page so it ENDED quick.......Good luck with your writing. I ain't waiting for part two and I do not routinely comment on stories........You deserved a review.........
One can usually equate an immature fascination with big tits with a poor quality story and this one didn't disappoint.
The storyline was good, but you need to work on your grammar etc. This is rape though, so be careful how you write things. If he woke her before entering and she clearly consented it may have been better. On the whole, not too bad :) keep practicing