All Comments on 'Got Caught by Daddy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Seriously?

Dad or stepdad? Make up your mind. Don’t even get me started about the grammar. *

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
Dad gets what he wants

Daughter gets what she wants.

Both are HAPPY

How about another chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Rape!

This was rape pure and simple

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
WHAT THE FUCK

This is the first time I gave a story one star. You have some old dude RAPING a woman. Then you progress to chocking a woman. What the fuck is wrong with you??? I am glad you made this one page so it ENDED quick.......Good luck with your writing. I ain't waiting for part two and I do not routinely comment on stories........You deserved a review.........

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Double D cups

One can usually equate an immature fascination with big tits with a poor quality story and this one didn't disappoint.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The other comments are harsh

The storyline was good, but you need to work on your grammar etc. This is rape though, so be careful how you write things. If he woke her before entering and she clearly consented it may have been better. On the whole, not too bad :) keep practicing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Ignore them

Ignore them pussy white knight morons your story is amazing

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