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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/11/05

Great Story

I really liked the story, but you need to edit more, the mistakes took away from the story a little.

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by Anonymous04/06/07

next time, describe more

Pretty good, but I get the feeling you're pretty young and inexperienced. There isn't a lot going on other than your erection. I want more.

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by Anonymous06/18/08

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I don't disagree about editing or details--however, I politely disagree with your assessment of my lack of experience. My response is that not everything on Lit. has to be about big buildups and developed storylines--sex isn't that way. Sometime it is. Sometimes its about a wonderful one-night stand that has little to do with emotions and everything to do with cunts and cocks.

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