really really well written from the prospective of a wanton tease....keep it up
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Anonymous06/15/05
great hot story
Hot story, next time wear black seamed nylons, garter belt and high heels under a pleated mini skirt, along with a satin blouse and tease daddy even more. Then let him cum all over your face and clothes
Ha! I haven't held my breath reading a story for so long. You have a way in writing your story. Although, honestly I kinda gagged at the last sentence....it was so 80s.
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Anonymous06/22/05
sucked
mispellings, bad grammar and somehow the female character "nut(ed)." try again...but not before you read a grammar book
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Anonymous07/11/05
Truly...
Yes, the grammar was a bit off-putting, but the story got so hot I didn't care! Whew! I'm still breathing heavy!
Lukas
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Anonymous07/11/05
Exciting
This story was hot and exciting, just what we want from Lit stories. Its nice to have perfect grammar and spelling, but that doesn't make for a great story. This was great and I hope you write many more.
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Anonymous07/14/05
FFFFF Fantastic
Forget the bad comments the content was one of the best. Only disapointment - it was too short. Much much more of the same please.
Comical how the bad comments are always "anonymous" isn't it?
I'll finish my comment when I read the second section of this story! (It is already published.)
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Anonymous06/02/06
What a Fucking
Women have told me that making love is wonderful, but sometimes nothen will satisfy like a good hard fucking. I loved your writing, it's very intence and exciting. Please do not listen to anyone, just fallow the lust within.
DON'T MAKE ME WAIT TO LONG !!!!!
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Anonymous10/17/07
well...
The part about the hard, crusty meat rubbing against her pussy was a bit much, but otherwise it was a decent quickie. :3
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Anonymous10/13/09
Yummy
Always love a story about Daddy fucking his little girl. I loved that she seduced Daddy, but the little bit of force made it extra special. Got me thinking nice thoughts about my Daddy.......
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Anonymous04/01/12
Very nice
incestuous kiss,
That was very well done, I hope you have more for this family.
HLP
English
wow
really really well written from the prospective of a wanton tease....keep it up
great hot story
Hot story, next time wear black seamed nylons, garter belt and high heels under a pleated mini skirt, along with a satin blouse and tease daddy even more. Then let him cum all over your face and clothes
HOT...but...
Ha! I haven't held my breath reading a story for so long. You have a way in writing your story. Although, honestly I kinda gagged at the last sentence....it was so 80s.
sucked
mispellings, bad grammar and somehow the female character "nut(ed)." try again...but not before you read a grammar book
Truly...
Yes, the grammar was a bit off-putting, but the story got so hot I didn't care! Whew! I'm still breathing heavy!
Lukas
Exciting
This story was hot and exciting, just what we want from Lit stories. Its nice to have perfect grammar and spelling, but that doesn't make for a great story. This was great and I hope you write many more.
FFFFF Fantastic
Forget the bad comments the content was one of the best. Only disapointment - it was too short. Much much more of the same please.
Comment is comical
Comical how the bad comments are always "anonymous" isn't it?
I'll finish my comment when I read the second section of this story! (It is already published.)
What a Fucking
Women have told me that making love is wonderful, but sometimes nothen will satisfy like a good hard fucking. I loved your writing, it's very intence and exciting. Please do not listen to anyone, just fallow the lust within.
DON'T MAKE ME WAIT TO LONG !!!!!
well...
The part about the hard, crusty meat rubbing against her pussy was a bit much, but otherwise it was a decent quickie. :3
Yummy
Always love a story about Daddy fucking his little girl. I loved that she seduced Daddy, but the little bit of force made it extra special. Got me thinking nice thoughts about my Daddy.......
Very nice
incestuous kiss,
That was very well done, I hope you have more for this family.
HLP
Very Good
Good read. Really liked it but short. Keep writing and dont let anyone stop you.
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