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I coldn't see the picture
but I liked the poem
very much.
Thanks.
~ J
Great poem...
but we can't see the image.
doesn't need a picture...
I liked it without the distraction of an image...the only image I needed was painted by your words. Nice job, TD!
sweet
Once again you have written another great poem Turtledove. You do such an awesome job and I thoroughly enjoy reading your writings. Keep up the good work hun
Obsessions....
you painted a brilliant picture for all to see
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Again, even without the pic, the words ring out loud and true.
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Again, even without the pic, the words ring out loud and true.
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Again, even without the pic, the words ring out loud and true.
Powerful Prose
I feel this is your most powerful poem. It grips you!
TO ACCEPT AND ALLOW
all thats given is selfish, TK U MLJ LV NV
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