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Adventures in Oz Ch. 03

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by msboy806/19/05

Good Story, but...

... it sounds like it's over. What about the Wicked Witch, the flying monkeys, etc. Much more could have gone into this series. You left out a name at the end too, try an editor.

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by caoimhe4202/19/10

nice!

very creative and well written loving the idea, only wish it had been longer!!
lol lord know i'll never read frank l baum the same way again :P
I especially dig the crude oil as the tinmans come, good thought

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