This story is superb. A story of sensuous love that lifts the heart as well as having a disturbing effect on my penis :)
by
Anonymous06/16/05
Got away from you
A good story gone bad. You really fucked this one up.
by
Anonymous06/16/05
Oh Man!!!
Leo, You captured it so well! I can remember all my 'firsts' and you took a picture of them!
Thanks, Leo...SUPERB character development and description.
I wish I had your eloquence...and a Maxiraspberry to that coarse soul who left the nasty comment.
Keep up the great work! I await the coming chapters although with a certain sense of dread.
by
Anonymous06/16/05
i don't wanna be a pest..
but you do know it takes roughly a month for the Pill to take effect, right?
by
Anonymous05/24/06
sweet
thanks, merlins a good name, i'm going to use it
by
06/01/07
Very Sweet
very sweet first time although after you read the other chapters it's sad really.
English
Another great chapter
Superb. Waiting breathlessly for Ch. 6! Good job!
enthralling
This story is superb. A story of sensuous love that lifts the heart as well as having a disturbing effect on my penis :)
Got away from you
A good story gone bad. You really fucked this one up.
Oh Man!!!
Leo, You captured it so well! I can remember all my 'firsts' and you took a picture of them!
Thanks, Leo...SUPERB character development and description.
I wish I had your eloquence...and a Maxiraspberry to that coarse soul who left the nasty comment.
Keep up the great work! I await the coming chapters although with a certain sense of dread.
i don't wanna be a pest..
but you do know it takes roughly a month for the Pill to take effect, right?
sweet
thanks, merlins a good name, i'm going to use it
Very Sweet
very sweet first time although after you read the other chapters it's sad really.
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