definatly different. I liked it though. the story was original and you provided a good amount of background on Jamie though I would have liked to know more about why the aliens were studing him in the first place. The pace was good and it flowed well. At first I though the chapters were to short but you did stop them at good places. It was well done.
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definatly different. I liked it though. the story was original and you provided a good amount of background on Jamie though I would have liked to know more about why the aliens were studing him in the first place. The pace was good and it flowed well. At first I though the chapters were to short but you did stop them at good places. It was well done.
LOL! Yayz!
This story made me laugh so freaking hard! I loved it!
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