All Comments on 'Flesh For Fantasy Ch. 10'

definatly different. I liked it though. the story was original and you provided a good amount of background on Jamie though I would have liked to know more about why the aliens were studing him in the first place. The pace was good and it flowed well. At first I though the chapters were to short but you did stop them at good places. It was well done.

This story made me laugh so freaking hard! I loved it!