by Goldeniangel
Excellent writing...loved how you took a beloved children's story and spiced it up nicely. Good Job!!!!
Very creative and kinda funny. I love it and very aroused with the story.
Very very hot story I would love to read more if you have them please if you can i'd love to get a notice from you if you post another one. Thanks
Loved the story. It was great to see such a tale redone in so sensuous and tender way. Romance and anal sex, combined with a great one-liner at the end, make me wish this story were much longer, to see the new queen respond to her king's advances, awake all the while.
That's got to be the most creatively erotic twist to a fairy tale I've ever read.
you really need to check your spellings,as there are lots of stories like this made bad by spelling mistakes