Alien Capture

very good

I like the story. will there be more added to it?

outstanding

I hope you continue with this story line.

very sexy

I'd love to see more of this, maybe see a relationship develop between Renee and her captor, and especially more detail on the fascinating cock he has.

Great story

Let's hear how Renee adjusts to life as as a skave

Please, more!

I'm with everyone else. Write some more please. You can't just leave us hanging.

very interesting and good...

more more more.....

Please continue

Another great story by you. please continue the story maybe she is pregnant etc.

Horrified!

This story scarred the shit out of me! I really understood the girl's mindset and understood her passion about NOT being captured and rather dying than to allow defeat. I usually get turned on by rape stories, but I experienced the horror of it right there with Renee or whatever her name was. I couldn't even jack off this was so frightening! I mean God Damn Chick! I am used to the human (or my side) winning, even if they lose at first. But her situation is so hopeless the only way i see her “winning” is committing suicide, and I HATE SUICIDE! This story made me understand what a rape victim must feel like.
Good job on such a compelling story, and I like your other stuff (I have read) but Shit! I feel like her whole life is going to be spent being used by that freaky alien and she will live a horrible life until she finds a way to kill the alien, or commit suicide. (I hate suicide because it's like saying “I give up” and it seems weak to me.)

good job

Interesting story I enjoyed it but would have been better from someone's perspective, say have Reenee telling the story 1st person point of view. I wonder if her life will be a horrible one or if she will give in and enjoy small pleasures where she can and accept her fate. Thanks

A good introduction

What we have is a good teaser - a tiny tidbit which shows promise. What we don't have is a story. It's an introduction, but no real development and certainly no conclusion. I'd love to see you take this idea and develop it. What happens after this? What is Renee's life after the Hendar makes her "his"? Does she get rescued - or does she even want rescue? By all means, do keep writing. You show some real promise that I would enjoy seeing come to fulfillment.

Very good

Please continue, this is a great first chapter. I'll check in and see if you added a next one

Good Start

But yeah this definitely needs more chapters...

Needs more chapters and character development, other than that this was perfect.

more more

Please continue. Great start!

More

Oh please, this story should be continued, it's great and so unique :)