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I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT WHEN A PLAN COMES TOGETHER !!!!!!!! You have a good story going,Keep it going. Incest is best kept in the family, hee hee.
Good Hot Start!
Very Hot! You need to continue on this one. It has some real potential. Have siblings really fall in love ,not just lust as it is now. Alex has to remain part of threesome also. Maybe get Alex pregnant. As I said, lot's of good possiblities for a talented writer such as yourself.
Fear of Loss and Hope of Gain
Early in my sales career, I learned that the thing I needed to establish in my customer's mind was a fear of loss and a hope of gain. That is what these teen-agers did with their aunt. They made her hope to gain a permanent relationship with them and fear that she might lose that relationship. Well done!
Nookiehunter
Pussy
Loved this story!
nice
continue some people should be getting pregnant soon
Woo!
Loved it! So hot!
That was hot!
But at the end of the first part i thought she was going to seduce her parents so they could fuck whenever they wanted and would have loved more details. though it still deserves 4 stars.
Awesome Read!
I think that you should continue the story line.
MORE PLEASE???????
More chapters, please!
There's more to tell in this story, please, don't leave it hanging here!
I agree, there's more to this story so write it.
...keep going....BUT......
Please keeping going with this story. BUT please DO NOT add the parents into the mix. Too many family members involved mess up the excitement of the stories.
Simply Raunchy?!
Hot Diggidy!It's the family version of 3's company!
my brother and I
Well it is a good story I Liked it how can i write my own story so others can read it. I have had incest with my brother it was hot too but it had to stop because he ended the relationship.
So fucking hot
OMG i got so wet reading this story I hope there is more to come because I really enjoyed it. I Want to make myself cum to this story.
He just up and shoves his dick in his sisters ass out of the blue and she squeals in delight? Yeah right! More like screams in intense pain from having her virgin tight little hole suddenly raped. ...and a wet dick from pussy juice wouldnt last but a few seconds even if he had worked her open with a few fingers first, lol.
The rest of the story was fairly decent though.
Wow
I didnt think you wrote that good :)
more
i think it was good but you need to finish it
good try
Good try here but not nearly as good as the first one.
Fun for a shorty story! :). I'm not buying him just shoving his huge dick right up her ass and her squealing in joy though, lol.
make the chapters longer and flesh them out a bit. I liked it but would love it if they were longer.
So fucking sucking hot
OMG what would I not give to be fucking and sucking these two cock and cunt struck cunts. I am going to have to act these stories out with either my two live in fuck buddies or a couple of fuck crazy MILFs I know, they are all four red hot redheads who never get enough. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk.
Thanks***
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