by 4degrees
Loved the whole poem.
Your imagery is crystal clear.
Great form and excellent flow~!
More plaese Oh Word Wizard..
Also your word play... Superlicious~!! *grins*
Defintely a great one! The words seem to be active, not just words on a page. The visualization is the best!
What great beginning lines!! I love it! Fast read, smooth flow- very much enjoyed. Great imaginary and I definitely like your style.
and enjoyed it right from the start. it was a lightening like strike poem all the way......great job......don
Grammer explained in erotic terms. These are not words your fourth grade teacher taught you. Magic words poignant and delicate ~ with a touch of eroticism.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.
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while jumpin and jivin listening to us snore. TK U MLJ LV NV