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perfectly
delightful..playing in bed of feathers..loved the images...*blue*
a poem
to hover on the whim of a gifted artist. Well done
per-fect
in your ease of setting up a situation that leaves me breathless and filled with wonder. Sorry if this is a lame-kissy comment, but youre so good, I can offer no constructive advice :) just keep 'em coming
What a gem
I love the way you've crystalized a moment then given it a broader meaning with the last line. A beauty.
Tess
excellent
I was going to say "perfect" image, but it has already been done. ;)
Whhhh!
Playful and sexy. I like the lack of punctuation-- it adds to the airy feel.
Fly
very smooth......
and i like the correlation of the down and up of the piece.
The Feather
I love what you did with the feather, I've been trying to get a wisp of hair to do something like that but still cannot get the words to float right.
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To the best writing doesn't tell about an experience, but is the experience. Your writing is some of the best I have ever read.
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