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from my pillow

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/12/05

perfectly

delightful..playing in bed of feathers..loved the images...*blue*

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by Kaishaku06/12/05

a poem

to hover on the whim of a gifted artist. Well done

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by Maria239406/12/05

per-fect

in your ease of setting up a situation that leaves me breathless and filled with wonder. Sorry if this is a lame-kissy comment, but youre so good, I can offer no constructive advice :) just keep 'em coming

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by Anonymous06/12/05

What a gem

I love the way you've crystalized a moment then given it a broader meaning with the last line. A beauty.

Tess

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by 06/13/05

excellent

I was going to say "perfect" image, but it has already been done. ;)

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by Anonymous06/13/05

Whhhh!

Playful and sexy. I like the lack of punctuation-- it adds to the airy feel.

Fly

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by dcpoet4406/14/05

very smooth......

and i like the correlation of the down and up of the piece.

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by ~hellbaby~06/14/05

The Feather

I love what you did with the feather, I've been trying to get a wisp of hair to do something like that but still cannot get the words to float right.

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by Bill Dada01/19/06

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To the best writing doesn't tell about an experience, but is the experience. Your writing is some of the best I have ever read.

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by LeBroz04/21/08

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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,500 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.



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