All Comments on 'from my pillow'

delightful..playing in bed of feathers..loved the images...*blue*

to hover on the whim of a gifted artist. Well done

in your ease of setting up a situation that leaves me breathless and filled with wonder. Sorry if this is a lame-kissy comment, but youre so good, I can offer no constructive advice :) just keep 'em coming

I love the way you've crystalized a moment then given it a broader meaning with the last line. A beauty.

Tess

I was going to say "perfect" image, but it has already been done. ;)

Playful and sexy. I like the lack of punctuation-- it adds to the airy feel.

Fly

and i like the correlation of the down and up of the piece.

I love what you did with the feather, I've been trying to get a wisp of hair to do something like that but still cannot get the words to float right.

To the best writing doesn't tell about an experience, but is the experience. Your writing is some of the best I have ever read.

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,500 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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