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Hi! the story was okay and I feel that Kerry and Derrick have some sort of chemistry. I just hope they develop it into something stable and serious. Anyway, I doubt that Kerry would be able to swallow everything esp. the first time. I mean, if a man shoots up a lot of his semen, I don't think a virgin would be able to swallow all of it. But still, it's ok!
a great story, nice build up
you built up fast and brought it to climax, i hope it develops in something richer ...
Very good
I enjoyed that.
I had a smile from it and it was a good read as well. I was sorry it ended so quickly and so abruptly.
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