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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/13/05

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Your poem has been mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews.

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by Anonymous06/14/05

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Vivid images described with well chosen words.

"vermilion titan unshackles
her phoenix. " indeed!

Tess

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by dcpoet4406/14/05

nice title.......

and all that follows is nice imagery. agree with tess on selected lines.......nice job.......don

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by Bridget6906/14/05

Nice flow...

of mythical images.

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by My Erotic Tale06/14/05

sci fi poetry

that was a wild word ride. A spiral descent of literature like a water fall, it loudly splashed, I just can't grasp it. ^5 (O_O)

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by sack12/06/05

simply beautiful.....

I thought the best line was "timeless hourglass of symmetrical perfection", but they were all darn good!

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