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Loved
the ending. It fits her right just to wear only the emerald green slut shoes. Now, get sometype of revenge on Kenny. If you divorce her, make Kenny and the swinging couple, the other parties, liable for the divorce. The lights on and the car horn honking was the coup de' gras.
Cold man just cold.....
I like this guy!
Yeah some here will be like "why didn't he just bust in and mess every one up?"
Becouse his name isn't Rambo morons.
Sorry had to get that out of the way. See as far as I can tell, he knew that the marriage is over. She's cheating and it seems to be a regular and usual thing. so he sees the affair, only complaint he needed to some how get evedence...maybe a camcorder or something, and then kicks her out.
No violence, though I will admit in SOME -STORIES-, have to make that distientions, violence is not the way to go IRL kids, Violence is called for.
Just a last second and very creative last bite. Wonder what she was thinking when he tossed her out and did that? lol
Keep it up!
Needs a Chapter 2
A good story well put together but it should have a chapter 2 as there's work to be done (spelled REVENGE). Ronnie W.
Another good story
Liked the way he worked it around. Good ending and nice build up.
Damn Bob, this is like your 3rd story where
you portray an actual husband reacting to his wife's betrayal instead of having him turn into a cum cannon upon finding his wife cheating. Thanks for remembering that the majority of readers (in my opinion) don't like cheating wife without consequences stories.
Yaaaaawnnnnnn....
Another revenge story. How boring. Makes you wonder why they call this place litEROTICA.
Nicely done
The high heels were a good hook. You did the two acts well - the party and the house. Him tossing them to her on the porch is a nice resolution. Having the lights go off was Seinfeldian.
I enjoy ....
reading your stories and they are always well written, erotic and captivating. The 'revenge' factor seems to have spared you from the usual castigation that writers in this section attract.
problem
why did Kenny, 'the friend', try to drag the Dave, the husband, to the parked car to see Alice, his wife, cheating? it is not like Kenny didn't know who it was - he knew those emerald shoes!
was he TRYING to break them up? then why didn't he confront Dave, the husband?
and then why did Kenny sneak in and out later, instead of trying to get caught by Dave?
doesn't make sense....
Thanks Author - Talent & Reality - Nice Work
You dog - thanks - The setting, flow and storyline were strong as usual. The theme appreciated and much like life would deal it.
Chapter 2 a possibility? Our minds can work it out unless you see more.
Author - you and your work in this venue is appreciated and entertaining. with high Regard
Reve ge? What Revenge?
There's still 5 guys walking around that shouldn't be.
When he dumps on them, then he has revenge.
You left this story high and dry.
He could have taken a shotgun from the closet and sent all of them nude without clothes or keys out of the house and then pulled the locked trick. Or being a devious sort I would have come home been surprised, grabbed a shotgun and started firing to kill the men raping my wife. You do have the right to defend yourself and your property, it would have of course been a shame that the wife got in the line of fire.
Far too unrealistic to be possible so I gave it a 1 star.
If she had just been fucked by one guy, I would have given it 5 stars. However, the story was to extreme and would not be possible.
Not Enough
Revenge, what revenge. She will be a bit embarrassed until she rapes him in the divorce. She can sell cruelty fairly easily since he cannot prove why he threw her out naked. We don't even get any feeling that she will be sad that she lost her husband.
How about spending a few more brain cells on one like this. You had the beginnings of a great story. I am not big on violent revenge nor on leaving someone homeless, but there should have been a price to pay for all involved. As you left it, there will be none. Actually, he will probably get shit on by the town for throwing her out as all the others will deny his accusations.
Once again, a very unsatisfying ending. However, I do have to agree, at least you didn't have the husband jacking off in the closet.
Well that wasn't his best option/idea
He may have felt good momentarily but when she gets an attorney he's going to get reamed. Another unfinished story by the master. And since Bob likes to leave some of his stories with no comments, I'll take this space to comment on the previous story - "The Driveway". Another story that I hated when he took the cheating slut back knowing she would cheat again. But the thing that I hated MOST about that story? Who the HELL names their son Barnaby????? Poor kid will spend his life living that one down.
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