All Comments on 'A Pony is Broken'

A great story. You showed and explained a part of the BDSM lifestyle so well. Good writing, Keep it up!

It was indeed a great story, the only part I did not like was his admission that she had his love only when she was submitting to him.

You get teh pace of this just right .... enough waiting ... enough time to anticipate. Maybe next time you will get him to use the butt plug and have her have to learn to like it. He can use orgasms as a way of teaching her to like new things.