PRETTY GOOD, LOOKING FOWARD TO PART TWO.........
Nice little twist to the story. The descriptions are quite good of the sexy Eve. Waiting for the next chapter...
Very few stories leave me hanging for more, but this is a decent, compelling story. Would love to see it continue.
Good plot twists too. Liked your writing, can't wait for more. Would eventually like to read about Eve and her girlfriend fulfilling her fantasy at work.
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PRETTY GOOD, LOOKING FOWARD TO PART TWO.........
Great Fantasy!
Nice little twist to the story. The descriptions are quite good of the sexy Eve. Waiting for the next chapter...
Great fantasy!
Very few stories leave me hanging for more, but this is a decent, compelling story. Would love to see it continue.
Great Start!
Good plot twists too. Liked your writing, can't wait for more. Would eventually like to read about Eve and her girlfriend fulfilling her fantasy at work.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Eve's Drops or
More submissions by mpqm1968.