Looking forward to reading Part 2
There were too many words that were mispelled and out of place to really focus on the story. Get an editor!
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Nice one...
Looking forward to reading Part 2
Too distracting
There were too many words that were mispelled and out of place to really focus on the story. Get an editor!
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