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by Syndra Lynn06/16/05

so burdened!

this is burdened with emotions, but not with words. Tight, visual, clean. Terror. Good piece

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by Anonymous06/17/05

*****

This has a fresh feel to it conjuring up old horrors. vivid, evocotive.

Tess

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by Anonymous06/17/05

Normally..

..I love your poems but this one fails for me, not because of the use words or the structure of the poem but because for me it fails on an emotional level. It seems full of surface description which would normally be fine but this subject needs soul and for me you fail to get under the skin.

That being said it's a brave attempt at a very difficult subject.

b'brig

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