All Comments on 'Effort Is Not Evil'

Wow.

I love how you build this poem up and let it flow.

Great imagery and your wording is crystal clear.

You grabbed me in on the first line~!!

Felt my heart thump in the end.

Gotta hand it to ya...

Wonderful poem~!!!

Well said.

Rather than be condemned for our very thoughts, we should instead celebrate our capacity for restraint. Well put! ~Imp

is a virtue and you show wonderful restraint.

~Honey