Third or forth story I've read from you.
You have a great feel for place and description.
Great little fantasy, with lots of erotic detail, but without being nasty.
Thanks
What a truely amazing story. You could have sold this one. You took the time to create a story with a good plot. We all knew were the story was going, but you took your time getting there. So many authors these days just jump into the sex scene. Great details. Best story I have ever read! Can't wait to read what happens next; during spring break.
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Anonymous06/17/05
a followup would be good, spring break
a follow up chapter on their spring break fishing adventure would be good. give this a bit more than the too short nude camping story.
Normaly I get bored if no sexual intercourse takes place after ten or so paragraphs, but your story line was exciting and i read through it all with great pleasure. Am waiting to see the follow up on the spring break fishing adventure. Hope there will be more sex involved now the ice is broken.....
I thought you did a great job with this story, in spite of the comments that the fucking should have started in the second sentence. The build-up was a great table setting and when you got to it, the sex was just as vivid and detailed. I was distracted by a few homonyms (i.e. "shutter" instead of "shudder") and a couple of misplaced commas but largely the story was error free.
Great job. Hope you post a follow-up spring break story!
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Anonymous08/03/05
Superb
The super slow build up to the action had me on the edge of my chair! Looking forward to a follow up!
Thanks for a great read.
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Anonymous08/21/05
Excellent writing
Excellent writing. Loved all the back story and slow build-up; I dislike stories that go right to the event with no foreplay.
Sincerely hope you do a follow up at some point; this is definitely one story I'd like to see develop some more.
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Anonymous09/04/05
Steaming!
At the end of page 2 or so I was wondering if this was actually a story with no actual sex... and then you blew me out of my chair. Really hot, and I'm definitely checking out your other works.
No BDSM, male/male sex (that I have read so far), no drama, no mad cuckolding. All of that is well and good for those that enjoy it and I personally like some of it but it is good to read some pleasant yet sexy stories that don't contain that crap. I usually just skip that type of story if I get a warning and I don't really mind some light BDSM but I don't care to read about pain sluts and men that get off on torturing others. Thank you again for your work. I will continue to read those that I have not read unless they are listed like those above. I am 75, have had a lot of experiences and read a lot of fiction including a lot of porn.
Great story line,this is the first story of yours that i have read,it's nice to read about a background with such interesting detail,...i.e.How to catch bait,place bait on a hook etc.
Slow but detailed build up to a steamy storyline,well thought out and written.
English
Gloriously hot
Third or forth story I've read from you.
You have a great feel for place and description.
Great little fantasy, with lots of erotic detail, but without being nasty.
Thanks
Damn that's hot
What a drooling hot piece of work.
Well done.
Totally Awesome!!! 5 Stars!
What a truely amazing story. You could have sold this one. You took the time to create a story with a good plot. We all knew were the story was going, but you took your time getting there. So many authors these days just jump into the sex scene. Great details. Best story I have ever read! Can't wait to read what happens next; during spring break.
a followup would be good, spring break
a follow up chapter on their spring break fishing adventure would be good. give this a bit more than the too short nude camping story.
Good, but could have been better
You took too long for the actual mating to start. Otherwise it was very good.
Great Leading Up Reading
Normaly I get bored if no sexual intercourse takes place after ten or so paragraphs, but your story line was exciting and i read through it all with great pleasure. Am waiting to see the follow up on the spring break fishing adventure. Hope there will be more sex involved now the ice is broken.....
Outstanding story
I thought you did a great job with this story, in spite of the comments that the fucking should have started in the second sentence. The build-up was a great table setting and when you got to it, the sex was just as vivid and detailed. I was distracted by a few homonyms (i.e. "shutter" instead of "shudder") and a couple of misplaced commas but largely the story was error free.
Great job. Hope you post a follow-up spring break story!
Superb
The super slow build up to the action had me on the edge of my chair! Looking forward to a follow up!
Thanks for a great read.
Excellent writing
Excellent writing. Loved all the back story and slow build-up; I dislike stories that go right to the event with no foreplay.
Sincerely hope you do a follow up at some point; this is definitely one story I'd like to see develop some more.
Steaming!
At the end of page 2 or so I was wondering if this was actually a story with no actual sex... and then you blew me out of my chair. Really hot, and I'm definitely checking out your other works.
Makes me want to go fishing
Fun to read. Great visuals. I like the verbal sparring among the girls. I enjoy your stories. Xantu
Awesome
Very well written! Nothing over the top or unbelievable. He didn't have a nine inch cock etc. great story!
Fishing
Hope to read more of the girls and Spring Break. Thanks for a great story.
Damned good
I really enjoyed this story.
TxRad: Let me thank you for your stories.
No BDSM, male/male sex (that I have read so far), no drama, no mad cuckolding. All of that is well and good for those that enjoy it and I personally like some of it but it is good to read some pleasant yet sexy stories that don't contain that crap. I usually just skip that type of story if I get a warning and I don't really mind some light BDSM but I don't care to read about pain sluts and men that get off on torturing others. Thank you again for your work. I will continue to read those that I have not read unless they are listed like those above. I am 75, have had a lot of experiences and read a lot of fiction including a lot of porn.
Excellent Fantasy
I will have to use it to get to sleep-----
Good built to a hot group scene. I wonder if any one got them on tape from across the lake....
The Fishing Trip
Great story line,this is the first story of yours that i have read,it's nice to read about a background with such interesting detail,...i.e.How to catch bait,place bait on a hook etc.
Slow but detailed build up to a steamy storyline,well thought out and written.
Nice Story, Nice Fantasy!
Every man's dream! 3 young horny women, that are interested in the older man. Well written.
thanks for a fun story
well written, realistic, and sexy, just like the three young ladies who took so much delight in teasing him. I hope we get to read about spring break.
just, please, please learn the difference between shutters that go on the outside of windows and shudders in the middle a sexual encounter.
Oh yeah
Oh yeah ~~ I do need to start back fishing again as I just remembered just how much fun it really was.! lol Good story all of the way around.* "4" atw
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