Ilike the start. Looking forward part 2 and 3.
I like the way you take your time and start slowly, letting your characters develop. I Look forward to reading more of your work.
I'd like to write some more inane but sincere compliments but I GOTTA find out how 2nd part goes.
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Good Start
Ilike the start. Looking forward part 2 and 3.
Nice begining
I like the way you take your time and start slowly, letting your characters develop. I Look forward to reading more of your work.
Ditto for me cc delicious buildup!
I'd like to write some more inane but sincere compliments but I GOTTA find out how 2nd part goes.
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