I loved the story so much that it has inspried me to write a simular story myself.
Great story! I could visualize everything so perfectly. It helps that I have a great imagination too. I hope to read more of your writings.
It was not a bad story, but it was lacking in detail. You also need to work on your editing some. Besides these things it was decent to read.
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Great Story
I loved the story so much that it has inspried me to write a simular story myself.
Very Nice!
Great story! I could visualize everything so perfectly. It helps that I have a great imagination too. I hope to read more of your writings.
Decent
It was not a bad story, but it was lacking in detail. You also need to work on your editing some. Besides these things it was decent to read.
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