A Blackmailling Bitch

Loved it.

Jenny was a master in putting this together. She wasted no expense in getting a great place to fuck Susan in the ass, yet she saved the pussy for her father Ken. DarkCloud it would be fun to see a second chapter to see how this would play out :).

SAD ! ! ! !

I realized this is fiction, so what I say is fiction also. The stroy did have a different ending, but someone shoud KILL Jenny very slowly. Make her beg to be killed and then leave her to die a lonely and hollow death.

Please see the SAD!!! comment

However, Jenny shouldn't get off that easy.

sick and demented

you are one sick and demented child in turning your anger onto women when you suffer from a fetish or psychopathy of humiliation.
honestly run and get ALOT of help before this eats your soul.
there is nothing worse than a guy trying to write as a woman.

needs a sequel, this was terrific

finally an erotic tale with a great twist ending, bravo! sequel!

Yes!

I agree with (SAD) and with (Please see the SAD!!! comment) add another chapter and let the dad and Susan get even with that Office Bitch.........PLEASE

Paul

What a perverted conclusion

I did not see that twist coming, truly you must have a sick and twisted mind! I would love to read what happened once Jenny left with Susan tied to the bed awaiting Ken.

PayBack

I think that jenny need her comuppence and i think that susan and her dad should pay jenny back for her deviousness

needs a sequel

sequel!

write more

oh ur great this should be a book and a movie really i give u two thumbs up!!!!!

too ingenius, damn that was good...

If you have this kind of imagination you should really write a book because this was crazy. I enjoyed it really..

Very Hot1111111

Love it and am looking forward to more stories like this from you. So depravet and titilating. Yessssss.....

'consternated'

unless I've misunderestimated the dictionary, that's not a word. heh heh.

My god is Susan stupid

she just has to get her Dad to come to the hotel too and hear the first 2 minutes of dialogue (with a walkie talkie or so) and she doesn't have to do a thing with Julie. Please, if you make blackmailing stories don't make it trivial to get out of it. It destroys the story.

Continue

Come on now, wheres the rest of the story :-)~

Ugggh.

Oh god. That ending made me sick.

my goodness

I loved it!

WOOT!

That was damn good!A great story and twist,just a few spelling errors but otherwise a winner.

Escaped?

Susan's legs werent tied right? She could just cross them and try to get out of incest

Excellent

Excellent story. Very original, well-structured with a sublime twist at the end. Well done!

Depraved & Sick story with NO Sexiness!

Who ruined your joy? This is an AWfUL story! Gawd. How could you even THINK such creepy things? You told your story of depravity well, though: so U R not an idiot, just sick & wrong!
Oh well, so much 4 tender lesbian LOVE-making I suppose. Heh
Im going 2 go vomit, now, OK?
U Sick FUCK!

Awesome

That was really really good one of the hottest stories I've read on here.

Ken must be retarded

Ok so jenny told ken that she would be waitin for him tied to the bed. gagged. ok. so how many of you out there can tie your wrist and ankles to the bed by yourself? i can see gagging yourself beforehand. but if i was ken i would have asked jenny who is helping tie her to the bed. duh!

My Advice!

My Advice to you is keep pushing the boundaries of writing. I just Loved it! Please keep up the good work!

GENIUS I LUV IT

So intense! I hope you keep writing for sure.

awesome

Wow. What a great story. Definitely the best I've read on literotica. The twist ending made it great. But you have to write a sequel. I want to know what happens when Ken gets there and then the aftermath. Once again, great story.

Koop

That was great!you absolutely have towrite a sequel!!! Wonderful twist ending she is EVIL!!!!!!!

Dude thats messed up tricking her dad to have sex eith his own daughter.

plz

please could you write a sequel for this

Sequel????? [:

Please write a sequel for this, it's amazing!!

That was Amazing

Having her tied up like that for her father to do her, Brilliant.....

Pls write more...

It would be nice to have a father daughter romance. The happy couple shows their gratitude to Jenny by inviting her on their “honeymoon trip", training her to be their personal servant with lifetime job security.

all i can say is dam

Perfect

That was Fantastic. You need to write another one though I want to hear all about Ken and Susan and what happened when he got there

Part 2

I loved that story. I can't wait for a part two on it. Will there be one?

continue please

i love it, please continue this story, would love to see what happen next morning when her dad wakes up and sees her daughter and what jenny does with the video she recorded

?

That's the end? Seriously that’s the end?

It’s an interesting story and could be good if it were finished. I don’t really understand the reason for posting incomplete stories and abandoning them. At least mark them unfinished and inactive so people know and don’t bother reading.

continue please

please continue this

Good but..

AMAZING idea at the end
But why u no finish?

Susan's erotic night

Terrific concept. I'd LOVE to read a detailed description of Susan's ravishing by her father and, then, Susan's revenge on Jenny. Maybe after a few more dates with Jenny, Susan could be tuned into a willing lesbian slave?