by Solid Muldoon
Well I laughed pretty hard.
So either this is hilariously over the top, or scarily pretentious.
I didnot see anything wrong with this poem it expressed the emotions of the author in lure and erotic write. very good projecting literary art be it with a crayon it is poetry
Like it. It was the most different Erotic Poetry I've ever read.
...to your most witty or witless wit. How can I pick a line? Let me count the ways....
"gazingly longingly with longing"
"reeks of awesomeness"
"your corpulent ass/comoves me/like a nunatak does a Sherpa"
That last is ALMOST the best but, my dear Muldoon, the last stanza/strophe/(that last part, anyway) is the best:
Defenestrate me, mi amorata,
through thine soul's windows;
your azure, azure eyes.
Ah. Pynchon hizzown self if he wrote poetry--not that he does but for the sake of argument assume that he did, OK?--could not have toyed language better.
I am aroused, mon cher, I am.
Um, pretty funny.
for him or her it is not the Alps, TK U MLJ LV NV
My corpulent ass thinks this reeks of awesome, and I am greatly enamored of it.