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by Solid Muldoon

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
ha!

Well I laughed pretty hard.

So either this is hilariously over the top, or scarily pretentious.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
retro

I didnot see anything wrong with this poem it expressed the emotions of the author in lure and erotic write. very good projecting literary art be it with a crayon it is poetry

MsCreamyMsCreamyover 18 years ago
Well I for one....

Like it. It was the most different Erotic Poetry I've ever read.

TzaraTzaraover 18 years ago
Kneeling, I genuflect...

...to your most witty or witless wit. How can I pick a line? Let me count the ways....

"gazingly longingly with longing"

"reeks of awesomeness"

"your corpulent ass/comoves me/like a nunatak does a Sherpa"

That last is ALMOST the best but, my dear Muldoon, the last stanza/strophe/(that last part, anyway) is the best:

Defenestrate me, mi amorata,

through thine soul's windows;

your azure, azure eyes.

Ah. Pynchon hizzown self if he wrote poetry--not that he does but for the sake of argument assume that he did, OK?--could not have toyed language better.

I am aroused, mon cher, I am.

Um, pretty funny.

gypsywitchgypsywitchabout 18 years ago
simply delicious

But then what's not to love?

Solid MuldoonSolid Muldoonalmost 13 years agoAuthor
My only mistake:

Not using the word ventricle twice.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WHAT IS LEFT TO ESTABLISH

for him or her it is not the Alps, TK U MLJ LV NV

LyricalliLyricallialmost 9 years ago
Glorious :-)

My corpulent ass thinks this reeks of awesome, and I am greatly enamored of it.

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