All Comments on 'The Concert Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
This story is hot.....

I'm so glad you continued it! Who's going to fuck her ass next? Will they find out about each other? Maybe her brother will find out and punish her next, take care of her so good she won't need his friends, or maybe a little group sex/dps w/o the dildo. Please continue this, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Helpless_DesireHelpless_Desireover 18 years ago
Hey

Very nice story...it definitely got me going ;) Please make another chapter...I can't wait to see what happens next! xo

lusherlusheralmost 12 years ago

This series is dirty and hot as hell and this is my favorite chapter. I've reread it several times. It never fails to deliver.

SabineGrahamSabineGrahamover 11 years ago
More!

I thought the first part was a stand alone story and was so happy to see there was more! This is so freakin' hot! I think I'll have to come back and read this over and over again....

buttcheeks777buttcheeks777about 9 years ago
Wow!

OH!!! What a fantastic, dirty, naughty, hot story! I would love to be anywhere in that mix, fucking her sweet ass or getting my ass fucked like that! Or, both at the same time.. hmm..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Can I copy this?

Hi, so, I copied this on wattpad, gave you all the credit. It that wasn't ok just let me know. I can be found on wattpad with the username @forgottencharm. Thanks!

rodryder44rodryder44over 5 years ago
Concert II

Still suspenseful. Is her brother next?

creampies4evercreampies4everover 3 years ago
Five Stars

Loved how the story developed. Tina is slowly seduced by her brother's friend. Rick proceeds to seduce her while Tina mistakenly believes it is her boyfriend. Little by little Rick proceeds to stoke the fire until Tina is begging to be fucked in the ass. During the seduction, he brings Tina to the point of begging to be fucked in the ass while admitting that she's a dirty whore.

Gym52Gym52almost 2 years ago

A well developed story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I am brand new to this site and this story was the first that grabbed me. Enjoyed it immensly!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What a great twist! I love this so far

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

loved it...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Shes starting to see how much of a whore she is. Love it. Need more.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This is so hot

macisgreatmacisgreat7 months ago

You write in a style that I enjoy the most, descriptive, intense, secretive and ruthless sex. Keep it up!

maddictmaddict2 months ago

Were you in the room ? I thought she would have a dong for her ass but things happened very quickly. No pill no problem

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