All Comments on 'Babysitter Seduction'

I felt really guilty enjoying this story until the ending, which was absolutely perfect and made everything right. Incredibly erotic and a fun read.

This fantasy story could have been much better. You advised that it was "true"? Hard to believe! Katie was suggesting that they have another baby? What about Katie having a baby? These fantasy stories in general do not need mention of the Pill or condoms/rubbers. It was obvious that Katie was fed up with boys her own age, and it was a very good opening for her to crave his cock and to start an affair here with possibly her getting pregnant and moving in with them, for that extra baby.

The ending took me by surprise. Another good story from davidwatts.

You've topped yourself again David. This story was not only incredibly erotic with an intense buildup, the ending was totally unexpected and made me re-read the story. You're becoming the Literotica's own Rod Serling. Brilliant!!!

David, You outdid yourself this time. Your buildup to the main course was superb and the climax (all of them!) was wonderful. You have such a good feel for erotic stories and how to tell them. I hope you continue to write and share.

Bob

Wow! Heady stuff, especially the Rod Serling comment. I'm definitely a low rent Rod Serling, but even to have Rod's name on a page with a story of mine is a thrill, as he's a personal hero of mine.

Thank you to all of you feedback anons that I cannot thank personally, and I'll get to you other folk personally ASAP. Thanks again, and I'm glad that almost everybody seems to be enjoying the story, because that means a lot to me.

Mmmm... Think they should censor it?

Thanks!

True story? I doubt that! As I began reading this story, I thought it was going to be a great read. Unfortunately, the seduction of the babysitter was too fast and far to unbelievable.

at least give writers the courtesy of reading the whole story if you are going to comment on it! The nature of your criticism gives away the fact that you obviously didn't read the whole thing or you did and missed the whole point. Unlike many writers, I leave up all comments good or bad, and especially ones like yours.

This story was awesome. The ending was a shock and it added to the fact of how much power a woman could have. Very well written.

A real erotic tale that was beautifully finished with the hunter being captured by the game. Very well done!

Again.

I love reading stories about swingers as well as ones about babysitters getting their tight cunts riped into and this one has both! Keep on writting David!

My boyfriend and I loved this story.

LOved the sex and the ending was perfect!

Mentioning of the rubbers sorta fucked up this story.

Very, very well written. Paced extremely well. Loved the twist, it kept the innocence turn on going as long as it needed to be, and flipped it on it's back just to finish it off.

SHREWD!!! DAMN, did anyone beside me not see THAT cummin'...I mean coming? The couple who planned the seduction was just one of how many 'experienced' playas? That blew my mind so much, I had to read the last line again. And she's going for more...

Kinda makes you wonder about the "Six Degrees of Separation" Theory. How far would sweet little Katie's exploits carry her before it comes back full circle???

Things that make you go "HMMM..."

Or if your mind is anything like mine and trips with the possibilities...well...

a great story

caxtor

loved the twist in the end ...more pls!!

Did not see that twist at the end coming...and I loved it. A shame this story isn't set in 1979, because a certain song by Foreigner (Head Games) would be Katie's theme song, IMO, davidwatts...

What guys should have is fucked bareback in her cunt sametime even got her pregnant then turn her into gangbang slut have get pregnant everytime give her 6 kids pop out of her

It was truly one of the best, the ending was fantastic leaving room for a series that will take the reader to a whole new level.